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家园 我试着来改写第一段

先声明我对是冶金十窍通其九,只是按着自己感觉念着比较顺口来改的,同时也参考了阿嗑和闲来兄弟的建议。可谓众人拾柴火焰高。鸭兄弟对我的修改有啥意见尽管提好了,不到之处还请多多包涵。

Comparison of the History of Iron Smelting in Ancient China and the Western World

Iron is one of the most useful and important natural resources known to mankind. Not only because of its versatilities, but also because of its easy availability the Earth's surface. The Iron Age did not begin until about 1,200 BC. Different regions entered Iron Age in different times. Ancient Chinese had a late start entering this age comparing with Westerners. Regretfully, the usage of iron in ancient China is very often ignored by most scientific historians. Very few comprehensive studies of the history of iron usage and smelting in ancient China are available today. Quite possibly, the iron producing techniques in ancient China were more advanced than that of the Western World. Not long after the ancient Chinese began using it, iron products became more commonly available in China than in the West. In this paper, I will try to explain that the ancient Chinese had quite a few technical advantages in the processing of iron, and its usage in China was popularized faster than in any other parts of the world.

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