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主题:【求助】给CEO的email,要公司match捐款 -- 跑龙套

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Dear Mr. XXX,<--- 用你们公司总裁的姓。

整体很好,帮你改了下grammar

As an XXX employee whose country of birth is suffering from the worst disaster in 30 years, I feel obligated to make a plea for the company to match employees’ donations.

News carried images of great loss of lives and massive destruction. Despite the swift response from the government and international bodies, further assistance is still very much needed.

I know many XXX employees are eager to help. While XXX now doesn’t have a standing policy to match employees’ donations, this is an opportunity for XXX to make a good-will gesture to the Chinese people, who now represents the largest <Product ABC> and second largest <Product XYZ> market. As XXX expands its operation in China, the humanitarian assistance will convey XXX’s image of making positive changes in the world;“A friend in need is a friend indeed”.

Knowing the culture, I am confident that Chinese people will remember and in the future reciprocate(sp?) those lending a helping hand in the most critical time.

Should XXX feel it is better to keep a low profile on its assistance, I will volunteer myself to work with HR and inform whoever makes donations to not disclose the company match internally or externally.

Regardless of the final decision, both earthquake victims and eager-to-help employees will be grateful for your invaluable time.

记得附上你的联络方式:公司内的extension或私人的手机号码。

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